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Below I would like to use your translation embellishment function, please help me embellish my thesis paragraphs with the grammatical requirements of standard academic papers such as Nature, and give them in the form of 3 lists, with the original English sentences on the left, the embellished and modified English sentences in the middle, and the right-most column of the Chinese expression why the sentences are embellished and modified in this way.Please pay attention to the grammatical problems